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Incomplete sentence on CodeIgniter's splash page! - El Forum - 10-21-2008

[eluser]antiver[/eluser]
Look at the bolded sentence:

Quote:CodeIgniter is a powerful PHP framework with a very small footprint, built for PHP coders who need a simple and elegant toolkit to create full-featured web applications. If you're a developer who lives in the real world of shared hosting accounts and clients with deadlines, and if you're tired of ponderously large and thoroughly undocumented frameworks

If X and if Y ... then CodeIgniter is built for you!

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Incomplete sentence on CodeIgniter's splash page! - El Forum - 10-21-2008

[eluser]GSV Sleeper Service[/eluser]
eh? it follows with "CodeIgniter is right for you if..." which is perfectly valid.


Incomplete sentence on CodeIgniter's splash page! - El Forum - 10-21-2008

[eluser]antiver[/eluser]
Quote:If you’re a developer who lives in the real world of shared hosting accounts and clients with deadlines, and if you’re tired of ponderously large and thoroughly undocumented frameworks Codeigniter is right for you if...

is even worse. You can't possibly hope to finish an incomplete sentence with another incomplete sentence in another paragraph, in different font style.


Incomplete sentence on CodeIgniter's splash page! - El Forum - 10-21-2008

[eluser]Nick Husher[/eluser]
Verbs will be introduced in CodeIgniter 2.0.


Incomplete sentence on CodeIgniter's splash page! - El Forum - 10-21-2008

[eluser]antiver[/eluser]
That's cute.


Incomplete sentence on CodeIgniter's splash page! - El Forum - 10-21-2008

[eluser]lmv4321[/eluser]
[quote author="GSV Sleeper Service" date="1224622691"]eh? it follows with "CodeIgniter is right for you if..." which is perfectly valid.[/quote]

No, because it then becomes "If X and if Y" then "CodeIgniter is right for you if...". I agree with antiver that this incomplete sentence should be changed on the front page.


Incomplete sentence on CodeIgniter's splash page! - El Forum - 10-21-2008

[eluser]antiver[/eluser]
Danke ^^