First mini app--where to get constructive criticism?

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[quote author="PhilTem" date="1336563493"]You may also just post in here on the forum, but please don't do it with code brackets. Either use GitHub's gist or zip the content and just post a link here.
That way it's probably most convenient for everyone to read your code [/quote]

Thank you! Please check my new forum post.